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Verbal leakage- Writing with Emotion Workshop

Submitted by lou on Tue, 2011-09-06 21:47

Bull shit, verbal leakage,     
 you cruise in 2nd gear
When you should be in 3rd,
You don't engage your brain

Your a waste of space
All you can do is fornicate
And procreate that any ape can do

The fact of your existence offends 
Makes me want to stamp you out,
Scream and holler 

bull sit verbal leakage
I want expunge you 
I need lobotomise my memory of you
Obliterate the stain

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Workshop: 
Writing With Emotions

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raj

Tue, 2011-09-06 23:32

very hateful for sure but you may want to correct some spellos...the venom can be felt so yes it is effective..

raj (sublime_ocean)

lou

Tue, 2011-09-06 23:50

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Thanks , I can't spell we just have to face the facts LOL!!!!

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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lou

Wed, 2011-09-07 01:31

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I feel like i need a shrink, I have got my emotions all screwed up

LOL

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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