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with a nod to T.S.

when is a poem not a poem?
and does the heart ever let go?

the diamond in the rough
was a handful of indigenous rock
until
its essence was gleaned and
facets were carved with care

there are rubies in the dust and pearls
in the oyster beds, we dive into dirt and
smell of water
we tremble with the light
and light a candle in the hour
that is the darkest

let us remember that only hollow men
dare to sing
when there is nothing left
and this is the way the world ends.

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Sorry. Had to write down part 2 before I forget. ~A
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"A diamond is still dull if it walks in the shadows." That's a poem, waiting to be born, Ian.

~A

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and the way you connected them, but, I have one little misgiving; about "let us remember that only [hollow] men dare to sing when there is nothing left? For me, a hollow man is someone who has nothing left inside. Maybe you have a different meaning? ~ Gee

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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

Yes, but that one can sing???

~A

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