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embrace me
as the sky fits the earth
you fill my begging bowl
you plunder my depths
with your naked embrace,
the warmth of a thousand suns
swirls under your
fingers,
you touch me honestly,
your arms enfold me like
tender mercy
your passion anoints me,
one armed, I can not fight back.
Last few words:
poem written in another group as a challenge for using embrace to convey a feeling of strength and protection;. of course, I had to put my own spin on it.
~A
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Comments
raj
Sun, 2011-07-24 05:42
Anna
the sensual instinct is very perceptible in this write..
raj (sublime_ocean)