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the day Berlin brought down the walls

by the time you think you're a poet
you've huddled with your sacred cows
and piddled your father's fortune away
and then you think you can rhyme yourself
into oblivion with nothing but a pocketful
of verse

you've a prisoner of your own volition and the
sun is a freckle on your back, you've become
your own slave trader and you've begun to trade
your ghosts for simple but honest affection, one
that doesn't lie with ambidextrous hands, silent
and ignoble like the masses who sing the morning
like a doleful hymn, who rise with temptation
and sleep with alienation.

there's just too many of us and not enough of them,
poets line the streets with blind hands and walk
through walls with sewn lips.

poets stink to high heaven and rise to all occasions
basking in the afterlife like otters on their backs,
drifting with a stone to break open their clams,
catching the sun
with smiling whiskers.

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I was born in Germany, Ian. Strangely some incredible stuff happened in my life, simultaneously it seemed that the wall came down.

You are exactly right about the stone, thank you for reading and noticing it, I sure didn't.

All fbetter now. ;-)

Miss your hollyhocks avatar!

~A

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Aennchen, meine Sueße, Ich bin der Meinung, es gibt immer eine bestimmte ungesehene "Mauer", die zwei Denkenmodalen Deustchlands separiert oder verteilt : die moderne fortschrittmentalität, die aus dem Westen kommt, und ein besonderes" russisches" Konservatismus, das im Osten jezt regiert. Stimmt?

Immer mit herzlichen Wuenschen,

Joe

I don't know much about the reunification politics & policies as they came together to form one,
how it is evolving.

I do however, know the significance of Israel's 30' high walls, their demolition of Palestinian ancestral homes and olive, fruit trees... their resolution to make sure there's no land left to form a contiguous state of Palestine... The original Israel post 1948 was never enough even though it usurped the land of Palestine.

I also know of the wall between *I* and *thou*...

As well as the veil that floats between what is perceived as inside and outside.

Love,
Anna

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Es gibt keine Mauer zwischen uns. Reine Fantasie, meine Freundin.

Israel: Realpolitik, Anna.

Love to you, my Anna. Afraid I am done for.

Joe

"Alles hat eine Ende; nur die Wurst hat zwei."

I wanna bust through with a backhoe
leaving only dusty remnants of where walls were
strong and sturdily holding back the ways of us

thank you Anna

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