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Blood Lust

Submitted by lou on Sat, 2011-08-06 06:02

Eyes blaze in deep within the murk
fangs dripping in inhumanity,
immortal companions veiled in depravity,
draped in profanity.

Stalking their prey
with cat like precision,
sensuous seduction ,
playing with their food.

Terror stricken hearts give way
pierced jugular,
drained of dignity.
Human husks left by the way side.
victims of blood lust.

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

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Sat, 2011-08-06 09:29

Nice to see you're still on the prowl! Good work. Nice and dark.

Stalking their prey
with cat like precision,
sensuous seduction ,
playing with their food.

always, Cat

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Sat, 2011-08-06 10:01

Thank you, lol

Love lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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