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I think there should be storys
I think there should be storys as well as competitions but like compititions you could make it like a finish the story so it would appeal to the younger ones!This is a start the story I made comment if you like it or totally agree!
I gasp for air though I know there is close to none.My vision starts to blur but I can still see faintly a huge dark silluete lumbeers towards me I try to scream but there is no air left for me I slowly slip into a fading dream.My last thoght is am I dead?FINISH THE STORY
Thank you for reading please comment!
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Comments
scribbler
Mon, 2012-03-12 22:52
hello
At this time all short stories here should be posted as blogs just as you did. It is my understanding that a seperate short story section is in the works. Now on to your story beginning; You need to check for some typos and spelling errors but aside from that your story reads like a good beginning to a horror story. I await the finish and welcome to neopoet...............stan