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perception

there's a bird on the wire
eyeing his world from my vantage point
worlds collide

we see each other through the window of
perception
and reality takes a bow

there is grace in this moment
I pedal uphill and down hill with ecstasy,
crossing thresholds with robin's wings

there is a blade of grass that sings.

I listen to my listening.

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The only thing i'd change is, take the and out of i pedal uphill and downhill with ectasy, i would have a pause. I pedal uphill, down hill with ectasy. Love Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

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