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SHARED TREKS

Do ghosts of Clovis people walk
in woods beside me as I wander?
Are they with me as I stalk
sharing every hunt, I wonder?

I've found some shards they left behind
both in forests and plowed meadows.
Each time I do it brings to mind
I'm not the first to walk these sylvan shadows

In the low rustle of oak leaves
are those muted whispers that I hear
woven among the gentle breeze?
If so, the soft words are unclear

While traversing waving fields of sage
are they zephyrs skipping beside me
or spirits from the last ice age
and do they see just what I see?

Or do they still seek extinct prey
among the primal woods and prairie
instead of what is here today?
Of dire wolves are they still wary?

I expect it's mere imagination
which now haunts these hills and hollows.
Regardless it lends inspiration
each time a dim game trail I follow.

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Clovis people were apparent first to come to North America after the last ice age. They stayed a while and then suddenly disappeared. About the only traces they left behind were their hunting impliments. It seems they disappeared at about the same time a continent wide conflagration occurred. Some speculate that firestorm was caused by an asteroid hitting the Canadian ice pack. Glad you liked this enough to set you on the hunt. I'm not too happy with that stanza you mentioned either and will be reworking it soon...........stan

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Hie thee to the bed! (snake should like that advice lol) You probably need all the rest you can get.............stan

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You have mistaken a block head for a woodsman lol. Thanks for dropping by and reading this ............stan

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Got to agree with Lonnie, reading your poetry tells me you are a true Woodsman. The way you describe your travels in the country, tells me you are a true Poet. Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

I do manage to get out to the woods every once in a while. Then I just relay impressions. Appreciate the visit..........stan

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There is no such thing as being late in commenting lol. Kind of funny how the use of one word such as Clovis can set so many to thinking isn't it?............stan

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