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Resurrection
Inert in stasis,
Comatose, catatonic.
Barely breathing.
Resurrection, adrenaline pumping,
Surging assaulting my senses.
jolting, into overdrive.
Hunger, a craving
Consuming my soul,
Devouring my self control.
Bodies moist gleaming
in post coital congress,
uncoil our union.
Reanimated, sun light returning,
slave to urges once dormant,
Devastating eruption of feeling.
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Region & Country
West London
Favorite Poets
Pablo Neruda, Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics
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Eduardo Cruz
Sun, 2011-05-29 01:02
Wow
Reanimated, sun light returning,
slave to urges once dormant,
Devastating eruption of feeling.
what an incredible stanza.
It explodes on to the page.
great work lou
I love it just the way it's written.
perfectly carrying the emotions right to the bang!
Eddie
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
lou
Sun, 2011-05-29 01:19
Eddie
Thank you very much.
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
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