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granny's in waiting!

I loved my grand pas

They were dead before I was born
I saw both grannies
they both were
DEADLY
very deadly
poisonous snakes perhaps could be friendly!

any wonder my grandpas left early?
so why be sorry
glad they passed away
now it’s my turn they say
they call me every day
but still from them
far away I stay

hell will go loose I say
let both grannies now with grand pas
for the sake of Pete's life forever stay

I ain't going to join them any way
To the far beyond of the universe
I shall go right away
by passing their poisonous pathways

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Wait a day.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

I don't post daily
nor regularly
so when I am up beat
as there is no place to retain drafts
i default
then i remove when done with
Jess cheers
by now I know
all in neopoet

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my error.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

kindness Jess

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