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No Hope!...

On Saturday March, 31st, Chat on the Darkside, everyone should bring a poem with the theme of no hope.
There will be no happy-endings! I want your darkest endings for the subject of said poem. You have a whole week, so I expect that I will see some very sad and despairing ends for these poems. We will critique and discuss the poems and the endings. ~ Geezer

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On March 31st at what time? and central or eastern? Working on a poem now...

always eddy (& cat)

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And reply in kind, thanks.

I am usually better at giving the time and all. It will be at 8pm to 10pm EST. Hope you have got a good one going, I look forward to seeing you there, [if you can make it]. ~ Gee

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Your Darkened Hope

I’m horrifically afraid of darkness
It has no hope for anyone

Let’s not negativity cultivate,
as it’s already too late

the pall bearers are at the gate,
so why till 31st, wait

let’s go the cemetery straight.
You will lead at any rate...

loved

I've got two lined up! Now I need to decide between them which one I will present, LOL! They are both short. Looking forward to this chat!

always, Cat (& eddy)

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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

Maybe we will have time to present both of them! I'm glad you are stoked for this chat, See ya there! ~ Gee

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

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Negativity breeds germs ....as in poo

Make your self more positive
and
have the latest

Panda poo tea.

AND
ENJOY URINE THERAPY...

PLEASE REVERT TO BECOME
POSITIVE
ONLY POSITIVE

loved

don't know what to say, Loved. I already have two therapy sessions this week, I don't think I can stand another one. LOL ~ Gee

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

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and Regards

loved

I have a poem I just submitted called "TREND" I would like to use that one inyour chat room if you don't mind. I think it is in the vane of the Chat Room.

Eddie
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LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

not a problem. Looking forward to seeing you there. Thanks for stopping by. ~ Gee

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

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