The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The imagery in your poem "Boardwalk" is vivid and evocative, creating a sensory experience for the reader. The use of descriptive language like "salty water," "purple lights," and "briny seafaring lobsters" helps to paint a picture of the setting. However, there are a few areas where you could enhance the poem.

Consider paying attention to the flow and structure of your lines. Some lines feel a bit disjointed, such as "His wooden legs soaked it's feet into the sloshing" which could be rephrased for smoother readability. Additionally, be mindful of punctuation and grammar to ensure clarity and coherence throughout the poem.

Furthermore, you may want to explore deeper themes or emotions within the poem to add layers of meaning. While the imagery is strong, delving into the internal experiences or reflections of the characters could enrich the overall narrative.

Overall, your poem shows promise with its rich imagery and descriptive language. By refining the structure, grammar

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Your use of imagery, as always, is eloquent. I could envision this seaside scene with such a short poem. My only critique is with these lines:

"on. Sheets of purple lights drowned the sea
with their glow and a theatre of sea air mixed
with thalassic crabs and briny seafaring lobsters"

The use of the word "sea" three times in as many lines. The first one could be replaced with "waves." The second perhaps with something like "pungent" or "briny." Which I think could safely leave that "seafaring" to describe the lobsters. Overall, though, a lovely piece. It makes me miss the ocean.