That everything is ok. This doesn't sound like you at all, however, this is a very emotive and honest write. Most times I wish I was anyone but me and can truly relate.

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Computer critique:

"I wish that I was anyone but me" is a rhymed verse poem that delves into the speaker's desire to escape their own identity and the perceived inadequacies that come with it. The poem utilizes a consistent AABB rhyme scheme and a conversational tone, creating an accessible and relatable atmosphere for the reader.

The poem begins with the premise of finding a genie in a bottle and having the opportunity to make wishes. Instead of wishing for material wealth or power, the speaker chooses to focus on their own identity and their desire to become someone else. This effectively introduces the poem's central theme of self-doubt and the longing for transformation.

The speaker goes on to describe themselves as "the worst one of the worst ones" and expresses their eagerness to be free from their current identity. This self-deprecating tone conveys the speaker's intense dissatisfaction with themselves and adds emotional weight to their wish for change.

One of the strengths of this poem is its simplicity and straightforwardness. The poem's simple language and structure make it easy to read and understand, while its conversational tone allows the reader to empathize with the speaker's emotions and experiences.

However, the poem could benefit from a deeper exploration of the speaker's emotions and the reasons behind their self-doubt. By providing more context and background information, the poem could become even more engaging and emotionally resonant for readers.

In conclusion, "I wish that I was anyone but me" is a relatable and accessible poem that explores the theme of self-doubt and the desire for transformation. The poem's simple language and consistent rhyme scheme create an engaging atmosphere, while its conversational tone allows readers to empathize with the speaker's emotions and experiences. By further developing the speaker's emotions and background, the poem could be enhanced and made even more emotionally resonant for readers.

Be you!
Later,

why you would want to be anyone other than you. You have it all, looks brains, and... ummm... A good poem, but not in character. Hope you are well. ~ Geezer.
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Time constraints and expectations were meant to destroy our dreams. In a world where we
are required to perform tasks that will never be, but looking right in front of me I can see things
the way they ought to be. I must live in the moment and let the dead bury their dead!

Time constraints and expectations were meant to destroy our dreams. In a world where we
are required to perform tasks that will never be, but looking right in front of me I can see things
the way they ought to be. I must live in the moment and let the dead bury their dead!

Why change yourself just endeavour to evolve as an artist and an individual but never change your kind self. I don’t know you very well but that’s the person I see in you a kind intelligent woman striving for the personal freedoms of others that don’t enjoy the things we take for granted. In essence don’t change regards John

all at times wish to become something we are not. Self doubt comes with being human. Is there a reason you abandoned the ABAB rhyme pattern after the first stanza? Just curious

Self doubt is experienced more often than we want to admit.
Like your poem very much.

There would be very few people on the planet who at some time in their life who hadn't wished they were anyone but themselves. I can't tell you the times I wished I was anyone but who I am. But with age I have come to realise that I can only be me and me is the only person I will ever be. I accept who I am and all the cracks and faults that make up who I am.

I think when you wrote this you were going through a crisis of some sort but if you ever have doubts? Look at the beautiful young woman you are. The blessings in your life. Both of them. You are you don't ever try to be somebody else, because there will only ever be one Honor.

Kind Regards Jayne

I like that you were all over the page with your rhyming...it speaks of chaos and swimming through it. you are determined to meet every challenge, and it shows.

*love, Cat

I've taken to this piece as I found it very poetic,
to me you've said what you need to and kept it succinct
without rambling on,, (which poets tend to do)
I don't know you but, hope your piece was cathartic.

Obi.