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All He Is (a cinquain)

Steven
incredible, fantastic
amazing affirming astounding
quiet absorbing studious factual
nurturing

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a cinquain a cinquain Line 1: one word (a vocabulary word, a noun) Line 2: two adjectives that describe line one Line 3: three gerunds(verbs ending in ing pertaining to line one) Line 4: four words that describe line one Line 5: one word that sums up line (a synonym that sums up line one)
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I think that sooner or later, I shall have to try these cinquains. Nicely done, an affirmation of your love for Steven.
~ Geez.
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I have read that there a few different styles of it, but I do not know if that is true. thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate that.

*hugs & good morning, Cat

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Describing how you see your Steven and in my new favorite form. Well done!

~RoseBlack~

thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. I can see why you like this form. it is appealing.

*hugs, Cat

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Hi, Cat,
It sounds like Steven is nurturing - and all those lovely things in between! Very nice cinquain!
Lxx

thank you for your words of support.

*hugs, Cat

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You got yourself a real dreamboat. You’re a lucky duck and you acknowledge it and I love it because I feel the same way. I like the way this format feels.

Tim

as i see it, we are both very lucky in our soul and life mates.

*hugs, Cat

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and the most amazing thing about him, is he does not realize how totally awesome he is, despite of how often I tell him!

*hugs, Cat

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yes! in my younger years I knew way too many of them, lol

*hugs, Cat

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