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Mind and confusion

Last night my mind revolved
about its own inner axis
I couldn't make out
what happened

went off to sleep

A rested mind woke me up
smile
it's sunrise

I smiled pulled all curtains
windows were wide open
swarm of bees came in
Queen Bee...
also smiled ...

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

Hello, Lovedly,
A lovely abstract poem with a very appropriate title. I did see the sunrise when the curtains were pulled back, and the happy smile on the Queen Bee.
Thank you!
Lav

Thanks Lav nice comment as bright as the sun lol

author comment

bees could sting and leave no honey
still welcome em as Queen
will also be coming lol

author comment

bees to make honey. Lovedly will frolic with the bees and eat honey all the days of his life. ~ Geez.
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