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Things Missing...?
-I write of things that interest me,
-About the 'cards' that I've been 'dealt'.
-But worry that some doing so,
-Show need of psychiatric help...
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Tue, 2023-01-24 11:02
hello uncopied writer,
yep, most do, including me!
*well met, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Geezer
Tue, 2023-01-24 11:25
Nice one...
I'm not the limerest that some are here
so, I can't say hooray
But it sounds like a limerick
that I have heard
somewhere along the way
I'll guess it's good, and I'm hoping so
but I don't know
and I want one with my beer
~ Geezer.
.
Writing purely for oneself, is the ultimate in defensive posture.
mark
Tue, 2023-01-24 14:56
Yep
-but more so and above you know
-are those where help will not arrive
My mind and me.
Hello UW welcome along,
Mark
If not now when!
Someday I'll be a poet.
Rosewood Apothecary
Wed, 2023-01-25 05:00
This is my psychiatric help
But yeah you’ll find yourself exposing some layers that is for certain. I ask this question, are you really writing for others? I’m not. My ego likes to be told what I write is good. It doesn’t get bruised very easily with criticism because I need the outlet and I know it’s a healthy coping mechanism.
We are all in need of some therapy friend,
I truly believe this.
Tim