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Things Missing...?
-I write of things that interest me,
-About the 'cards' that I've been 'dealt'.
-But worry that some doing so,
-Show need of psychiatric help...
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Tue, 2023-01-24 11:02
hello uncopied writer,
yep, most do, including me!
*well met, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Geezer
Tue, 2023-01-24 11:25
Nice one...
I'm not the limerest that some are here
so, I can't say hooray
But it sounds like a limerick
that I have heard
somewhere along the way
I'll guess it's good, and I'm hoping so
but I don't know
and I want one with my beer
~ Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Rosewood Apothecary
Wed, 2023-01-25 05:00
This is my psychiatric help
But yeah you’ll find yourself exposing some layers that is for certain. I ask this question, are you really writing for others? I’m not. My ego likes to be told what I write is good. It doesn’t get bruised very easily with criticism because I need the outlet and I know it’s a healthy coping mechanism.
We are all in need of some therapy friend,
I truly believe this.
Tim