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A lovedly Composition... [for my friend].

Submitted by Geezer on Fri, 2022-12-16 15:11

All love to rise, it's normal
in the time of love
rising above, more than you two
thinking and loving lovely

Who is, we two? Who are you?
I merely compose the way I do

Whenever there is a challenge
we cannot pass
make sure you have class
It's all we have

I'm in the blues, loving you
in heaven when I am with the blues
love divine is no secret
it merely reads differently

Compose a lovedly poem
do it again
again, and again

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Last few words: 
I always read you. ~ Geez. .
Editing stage: 
Editing - draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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lovedly

Fri, 2022-12-16 23:53

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your verse is more lovely than lovedly ..
hope none feel jealous of you and me we two are just friendly two swans flying in the sky one high the other below which is which Gee you know .
Thanks for this lovely poem on lovedly For ever the time is left for me I shall abide by thee.
So many friends in the past three decades have composed poems on or for me
Then should not the amateur child of poetry be friendly with all neos who love or skip me ....
As promised no poem for a week till then read my poem Gee on thee Thank the stars for this one
the sunrise will come ....have again and again till again good fun
POET MAN...
The most admired one..
RGDS
from me
DEAR FRIEND Gee

Geezer

Sat, 2022-12-17 00:06

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We don't mean that you shouldn't post. Just don't flood the site with your poetly comments, critique, and your poems.
It makes you look like an egoist. I really liked doing this poem about lovedly. He is one of a kind.
~ Geez.
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lovedly

Sat, 2022-12-17 00:18

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Yes I do suffer from cancer of EGO..
Since birth
coz I never in life get my worth ...
till I lie as in lay .....besides the running river faster than the Nile ...
Then my EGO will be decomposed by Divine ...
but before that let us share a glass of red wine Then towards my last end I may shine

Ah blast me again my EGO bangs bangs wow bang................
more after it snows..

GOOD DAY Gee

Geezer

Sat, 2022-12-17 00:28

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seems to be a little bit sensual. As if your ego needs to be stroked. ~ Geez.
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