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Conversing with Sin
Conversing with Sin
Who are you? I’m Adam, I make bad things happen
Why is that? Cos I’m one of two people, I’m the breeder of shame
What is shame? It’s a seed that is planted like a tree
Does it grow? Yes, quickly; be careful or fall low
Who am I? I’m a snake, my name is Eve and I deceive
Do you steal? Yes apples, from this tree next to me
What’s the tree? It’s knowledge, but give me some relief
Why is that? Cos I’m guilty, I make other people lean
Lean on what? On God, and this man is very mean
What are you like? I’m like you, and we will both find
We can populate the planet, which will then decline
Are you for real? Or is this, a very cunning plan
To get me into bed? but yeah, you can!
Conversing with Sin, and conversing with him
Is conversing with her, the exact same thing
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Comments
Lavender
Thu, 2022-11-24 10:27
Conversing With Sin
Hello, Michael,
Interesting take on Adam, Eve, and sin. You've given a lot to think about with a very unique poetic approach.
Thank you,
Lavender
RoseBlack
Mon, 2022-11-28 18:02
An interesting take
I second what Lavender says about giving a lot to think about in this piece. It certainly gives a different perspective. Well written!
~RoseBlack~
lovedly
Wed, 2022-11-30 05:03
This is something so unique
This is something so unique
what all humans and animals do
through the day and night
why you call God's mission
as SIN...
May I you remind
he post ed women and man of your kind
to seed population
till they rest for months nine
you seed the soil of the heaven's
and spread the wings of heaven
mother earth is so happy man
you are working
helping god in his duty
we are just slaves of the night
live to enjoy
play not save
the world has picked up break neck speed
haven't you heard about trains
dashing at lightening speed
sure you too will all beat
ere you rest in... RIP
another comes and says
now see me
lol