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Music Under New Moon (Inspired by ‘Memory of You’ by Lavender)

My sleep being deep and brief
Waking to the new moon sky
Out under the stars I step
Time suspended in my eye

A shining perfect orchestration
Singing down from up above
Performing double brightly
Songs of universal love

These questions with half answers
Become a lavender sunrise
The stars have reached crescendo
They’re saying their goodbyes

They leave, and leave me thankful
On this and every single day
Grateful is a habit now
Love will always find a way

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
Last few words: 
Whoa! That was intense. I love you all.
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Hi, Tim,
I can feel your energy in this piece! Gratitude! So wonderful to experience the simplicity and the mystery of the autumn sky. My favorite lines: "The stars have reached crescendo, They're saying their goodbyes..." What a performance! Beautiful poetry.
Peace and love to you on this Thanksgiving Day.
L

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