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Pair of Swans .....SEPT CONTEST WEEKLY ONE
Lovely
What a lovely pair
of birds
one of swans
don't compare
they intermingle with all their
guests
as best
of friends
all simply love them
they are flying away
to the continent
for a longer stay
may God Bless them
we all pray
pair of swans
be happy and gay
loving is the only
pathway
do remember us all
once in a way
till in a newer country
you now shall stay......
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Geezer
Sun, 2022-09-18 20:32
Yep...
Time for the swans to fly home to winter quarters! Hope they don't get caught up in that storm out there! Fly safe
dear gentle guests. Stay away from those bad boys, the geese. A rowdy bunch they are. Nice party and send off for the graceful swans, lovedly. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Sun, 2022-09-18 21:09
GEEEEEE
Loved your humouristy
author commentGeezer
Sun, 2022-09-18 22:56
Geeeeee...
takes a bow.
~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Sun, 2022-09-18 23:30
WOW
BOW WOW
Thanks my master you save me from disaster lol
author commentLavender
Mon, 2022-09-19 10:56
Pair of Swans
Hi, Lovedly,
While humans prepare for the different seasons, nature does, too. Saw a lone swan in the lake this past March, passing through. You are right, nothing compares to them. Lovely well wishes and safe returns to the swans!
Thank you!
L
lovedly
Mon, 2022-09-19 13:37
Thanks and
many swans may u c
author commentlovedly
Tue, 2022-09-20 13:08
need to take a sabbatical
need to take a sabbatical
let oldies take a back seat
now the newer generation
after the swans have flown
take over the scene
Since SUN does set over all human fields
glory be now shared amongst a newer breed
let's them now feed
the grass is still green
ere NIAGARA snows
prepare a WHITE shield
relax if you feel
author commentRay Whitaker
Fri, 2022-09-23 10:27
Nooooo
No rest for the weary, dude!
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lovedly
Fri, 2022-09-23 11:25
HAHA
THANKS
WEARY YES BUT NO WORRY YET TIME HASN'T STOPPED TIS FLYING AT JET SPEED
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