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My Love, My Rotting Leaves... Part #2

Submitted by Geezer on Fri, 2022-08-05 13:36

Witch doctor Mumbo-Jumbo
is pretty good I hear
He's filled the air with magic
and drunk a case of beer

Chicken feet are burning
Man, there's quite the stench
I swig a nasty beer
my thirst, it doesn't quench

Now, the haze of Ganja
makes my eyes turn red
I see her body twitch
soon, she will be undead!

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Carrie's up next, then Tim.
Editing stage: 
Editing - draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Fri, 2022-08-05 13:57

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be posted under my part #2?

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Geezer

Fri, 2022-08-05 14:22

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but now I'm having issues with my computer. it wouldn't let me even comment. [kept telling me it couldn't access them! So I posted a separate one.

It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

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Candlewitch

Fri, 2022-08-05 14:28

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want me to cut and paste it into my comments?

*hugs, Cat

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RoseBlack

Fri, 2022-08-05 14:54

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Mine will probably come either tonight or tomorrow morning. Work rest of the day today and groceries but will have some time later and tomorrow at my other job

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