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My Love, My Rotting Leaves pt.#2 (round robin)

My Love, My Rotting Leaves pt.#2

a witch doctor was listed
in my "Book Of Shadows" here
to call upon his services
it was high time 'twas clear

he arrived at midnight
upon the witching hour
in full witch Dr. regalia
he, feeling his full power

setting a black cloth on the table
to hold my beloved so dear
next to gather essential items
for the dark spell so drear'

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Gave me chills! I love the direction this has taken

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this is a lot of fun...it gave me a real kick to write!

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as Randy Macho Man Savage would say! Just let me a definitive answer from Mark. I'm ready and eager to get on with it!
~ Geez.
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thanks for your reaction, bro! so i can still write, lol

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Hi Cat! I really loved this piece… honestly it is absolutely amazing! The darkness that surrounds this poem is truly both enticing and unsettling at the same time! This poem leaves me truly begging for more!

the enthusiasm of your response lifts my spirits and makes me want to write more. thank you for the energy you have given me!

*hugs, Cat

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