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THE MAN ON THE SIDEWALK
The opium eater reclines with rigid head and just-open’d lips…
You all know how hard it is to find a good parking place
in a busy town. Well, we lucked out—or so it seemed—
while running an errand yesterday. I prepared to back in
when she said, no not here. I too had noticed the man,
lying on his side against the wall, so I pulled forward and said
why don’t you hop out here? Then I backed into
the space and got out. I pulled a buck from my wallet
and walked up the man, who looked up at me with
vacant eyes. He took the money with a sluggish hand,
and I caught up with my wife. He had his hand in his
pants, she said, explaining why she was annoyed at me.
Was it the hand that took the bill, I wondered.
We took longer than I thought, and I was glad I’d put
an extra quarter in the meter. The man was still there
when we returned, the dollar bill clutched in his fist.
... And such as it is to be one of these, more or less am I…
(Words in italics from “Song of Myself,” by Walt Whitman)
Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
Wed, 2022-06-22 21:17
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This is a tough topic. It’s hard to give money to someone who is clearly using. It’s hard to humanize that person beyond their addiction or mental illness or both. I’ve felt very uncomfortable at times. I’ve also felt very sad and compassionate. It’s really tough.
Candlewitch
Thu, 2022-06-23 04:24
dear Alan,
I feel sorrow and a bit of disgust for this man of no means, and hand in his pants. is this his only means of entertainment and pleasure? I ask myself, what has beaten him down and laid him so low? your poem depicts this man's plight very well.
*hugs, Cat
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Geezer
Thu, 2022-06-23 05:27
Having just...
lost a step-son to an overdose of heroin, I am extremely aware of the problems facing addicts and their struggles. Yes, it is a moral dilemma, do you chose to help them get their next fix, or restrain your impulse to give them enough money [in hopes]
that they get something to eat? Please read my "This Person Will Self-destruct In...].
I like the train-of-thought piece you have created. I felt it come through and your emotions regarding it. ~ Geezer.
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