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AND I RETURNED HOME

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2022-06-18 00:06

Wanted a long sabbatical
the storm came

no you can't fly
the storms over your domain
come later again
till then at home do remain

be prepared
for a free flight
go home alas
now no sabbatical
keep singing or rhyming
damn you
lovedly
don't be silly

that I am
no work for me
but skipping
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Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Sat, 2022-06-18 06:02

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you just keep making poetry; don't think about having time off. We won't allow it! Who do you think you are? having time off, indeed! I guess you missed your flight, huh? Oh well, there will be another time. Good piece about the frustration of not getting your little vacation.~Geez.
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lovedly

Sat, 2022-06-18 17:02

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At the last moment they canceled the flight
alarming storm
now go home sabbatical wow
now
sing your song
they r awaiting to hear your blaring deafy dear.

Next time take us along
SING SONG
ah but
THE STORM was still on

ADVANCE THANK YOU FOR READING GEE

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Candlewitch

Sat, 2022-06-18 06:12

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don't worry that you can't get away...make a nice cup of tea, play music that you love, and have scented bath.

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lovedly

Sat, 2022-06-18 12:05

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At the last moment they canceled the flight alarming storm now go home sabbatical wow now sing your song they r awaiting to hear your blaring deafy dear. Next time take us along SING SONG THE STORM was still on

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