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OBVIOUS POEMATICALLY
THE Obvious O Poets
Enjoy cold Ice Cream
Ice Creams are cold
haven't heard of hot ones
yet
It's raining outside
yes but of Course
it can't rain inside
Take shelter under
A umbrella
you meant
AN,
O Poetic Fella
in Poetree
use
a leaf
be brief
leave out trees
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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Ray Whitaker
Fri, 2022-01-21 16:05
Hello Lovedly
A tounge-in-cheek piece. I wish I could write in that sort of way. I seem to be immersed in some sort of reality based work…
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lovedly
Fri, 2022-01-21 21:49
Poetry is sheer imagery great poets never cared for prosperity
each poet has his own individuality
To be slated if you wish to be
take up publishing novelty
as Novels
Sir Ray
you may
author commentRay Whitaker
Sat, 2022-01-22 20:08
And yet…
Some poets seem to experience commercial success, are named poet laureates, sell out for their readings, etc. I’mnot in it for the cash, however would like to be known for my work worldwide.
I don’t measure my success in those terms, however i wouldn’t feel bad is some of those things came along for me.
I am not a “educated-in-college” poet…however have taken the time to read broadly, and attempt to understand the other poets ways. The poets I have listed on my bio page here are the ones I have found to be influential.
I will write no novels my friend…
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lovedly
Sat, 2022-01-22 23:36
Thanks Dear Ray
Read my poem based on your comment please thanks
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