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GOD'S WILL

AND THIS IS GOD'S WILL
Thank YOU I Must
FOR Passing Such Poetical Time
ALL Lords Blessings
A Wasteful Life
Passing BY IS Being Kept Alive

Keep THE Waterfalls Flowing
LET NOT THE Snow AT Niagara Solidify
Then What Will HE Think
Where AM I Alive

Gods Will IS Written
IN THE Winds OF Destiny
Some Read IT
Some Understand IT
BUT NOT

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

I will skip the discussion here and just let you know that I've read it! ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

GEE
I KNOW WHY
COZ U KNOW ME

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Is there a method to the capitalizations found scattered thruout this piece?you likely know that e.e.cummings wrote in this way a lot.

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Raywhitakerblog.wordpress.com
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Is there a method to the capitalizations found scattered thruout this piece?you likely know that e.e.cummings wrote in this way a lot.

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Raywhitakerblog.wordpress.com
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I don't comment on every poem
I used to comment
then convert it into a poem
my one a day kind

jess kicked me
Ian held my hand

Ray some say I maybe Wordsmith
some say Shakespeare
IAN always till his last days addressed me as
THE BARD YOU KNOW WHO

now you say ee cummings
wow thanks
don't I have my original organs

BRAIN is the most important
My mind works as a compy does
till some guy said
LETS CONVERT him into a computer

Today after a long wait
some one has commented twice
Thank you Ray
I try to claim I too am a NEOPOET
14 to 15 years as loved now technically lovedly

Thanks POET AND AUTHOR Ray
hurray

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