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HARMATTAN AMBUSHMENT

Submitted by Jackweb on Sat, 2021-12-18 02:20

I have been ambushed
by events of this yuletide
every where i go chilly as the morgue
the celebrations has become celebrities

in this odious moment
the season has staged me
prey for the morning night
the carnivores harmattan hijacked ruthlessly

my lips and my flesh wisp in spiral course
like cracking German floor

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scribbler

Sat, 2021-12-18 14:38

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Yeah this time of year is hard on some people especially considering how commercialized it has become. Any particular reason the floor is German?

Jackweb

Sat, 2021-12-18 16:31

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Do your polishing in the line sir.
Thanks

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~Jackweb

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