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Christmas -ish. Haiku -ish.

A coddling of eggs,
emptying of Santas sack,
an old bird well stuffed.

Obi.

Last few words: 
take care now I'm sensitive ! ish.
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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sensitive as the warts on Old Scrooge's ass! I see an elderly couple, having a break, after all their hard work! LoL
Geez.
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I can see I'm gonna have to school you on the use of proper "Englund" ish, Gee.

An "ASS", is a beast of burden one would laden and depend on to deliver ones possessions to, wherever !
Whereas, an "ARSE", is more functional and relieves said burden from whomever.

Winky eye,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Obi.

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I meant arse! Still good work!

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Very haikuish and perfect timing
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