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Toasty Tootsies,

As winter slaps the arse autumn
and lambs no-longer bleat.
I'm glad I saw these socks n bought 'em--

I've got reeaally frigid feet.

Obi.

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Your sense of humor is well expressed in your writing..

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make sense and stick with you, because, while funny they are so true! ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

I've since learned to inhale through my nose
and exhale through my arse!

Thanks fer the comments chaps.

Obi.

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I would love to read your take on Greeting Cards...

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