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It's Raining
It’s raining so hard outside
and the wind is blowing too
As I look out of the window
the dark clouds spoil my view.
I’m feeling a little bit bored
wondering what I can do.
So with my pen, I’m trying
to write a word or two.
I’d like to write a little poem
but I don’t know how to start.
I could write about the weather
or just something from the heart.
Maybe I should try really hard
to make my poem rhyme.
But that could be rather difficult
it could take me quite some time.
I wonder if I could write a love poem
but that could be really hard too
Maybe it should be a bit funny
oh I don’t know what to do!
You know what, I’m fed up now
my pen is starting to hover.
Writing poetry is far too hard
so I don’t think I’m going to bother.
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Structured: Western
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Comments
Timbo
Mon, 2011-01-10 10:53
thanks
thanks for commenting
Tim
scribbler
Sun, 2011-01-09 18:16
raining
lol a funny write of desperation ...................scribbler
Timbo
Mon, 2011-01-10 10:52
thanks
thanks Scribbler