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General comment

I am not even going to bother checking who gave you negative criticism but 1) supposedly people should not be giving picky bothersome comments around here because above all, the spirit counts so tiny errors really don't matter. 2) again I think we all do get criticized in life and usually that is the problem of the person who does it. We can only try to live an exemplary life, and not let people get us down. (I am not directing these comments at the other person, only making general comments.)

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